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well i respect your writing to some degree. more than your Disc persona. i just never felt your swag n flow verses, too smart while wanting to seem not smart, like a basic grasp of smart concepts you painted hood rich faux chrome.

just be yourself rawn

while mostly true he doesn't brag, at the very least, about the postbit accomplishment, like seyance.

not that i've seen, at least.

i give you a bly, rawn. your verse with cherry was pretty good.

@Seyance

i can respect that @Split

i do feel like ur generalizing off of like 2 peices though, but fair enough

Just a vibe youve given off in this past while. I havent been very active but I cant be the only one who picked up on this. Dunno what else you mean in reference to constant undermining tho

@Witty I enjoy your sense of humor, id never upset a fox

Vs nik-A

I also remember your shark diving verse, and vaguely something off Netcees 1

biggest complaint would be weird grammar/ word combinations (they clout) and occasionally weirdly out of sync concepts (pushing rock around town like Sisyphus... Sisyphus was a dumb bitch tho so it looks like youre calling yourself a martyr or w/e dumb shit he did)

I'd say a lot of your problems could be fixed if you stopped cutting necessary words out for brevity

@Split Eight black and igloo carried him on one, and i think the other was, somehow, for a site-wide collab which he started but offered a wack verse for. idk.

that would be fine. honestly. if it weren't bragged about like 'YEA. SCRUB. LOOK AT MY ACCOMPLISHMENTS. I WON AN FN AND LITERALLY CARRIED THE WATER FOR THESE OTHER MEDALS. ADAM SANDLER ASS NIGGA. FUCK YA'LL IF YA'LL DOUBT ME.' which i'm sure i've seen.

y'know. still getting the hang of that tag thing.

p.s. Sisyphus wanted to rape his niece.

I'm a Lord, and I'm super ill with rhymez
Kinda bored, doing a poop to kill the time

Over analyzing the base concept was pushing the rock

Talkin of pushin the rock, I think this dookie is blocked
Uhhhhh....cookie and cock.

rawn i think youre trivializing sisyphus

Dunno what sisyphus means, my penis is syphilis green
When Katy Perry is on tv i press my dick to the screen

#bars

Bars like the kinda ones where Lars fights
Giving bitches scars with hard rights

confident. i like it. not bad.

for da big baby record i eat lil babies for snf breakfast. i hear snf and have 2 watch on the sidelines like jordan during a laker game, rubbing my baby beard, saying, 'intriguing' under my breath.

Carry on every1

Fig crazy cuz he no showed da big baby
Been sick lately, foaming at the mouth, i spit rabies

@Rawn I got you homie. Pm me dude

I watched one of those military parent surprise coming home videos last night. Got a little dusty in the Pancake dungeon.

Also saw this

https://scontent-b-ord.xx.fbcdn.net/...97140570_n.jpg

Lold irl for 6+ seconds.

May be a new record, i usually don't laugh irl for that long unless other ppl are around.

was it moe than the loling you had on my pic the other day? :(

No big baby!!!

Don't be sad plz.

@Mike Wrecka

How many u thinkin 16 n itll b snf for sure

quit hating weird ass kid.. you been on my dick since i outted you and got you banned on multiple sites for biting topical verses. and told you to shut up when trying to back me with weak bullshit in threads on here. i understand you are new sour puss, but for some of us this place is a very small slice of our writing on the internet. seems like you take this all a little too personally, i can't even remember the name of your old alias that you used to bite. i really don't care about some jealous newbie and nobody ever carried me on anything.

BURBERRY CARDIGANS FRUMPLED

Ya 16

quite unserious. not new. talk of faggots riding coattails definitely smells like seyance, though. this IS a small slice of my writing. it's probably your entirety. your craft, right?

btw you're still a dumb motherfucker. you run with that. i did post mimic's video here about a year ago for the lulzor, though. ain't no one on your dick -- keep dreaming.