Ok thanks...

lol.. god.. jealous niggas still envy.. what ever happened to good ol' fashion battle rap and that was that.. smh.. whew, niggas be hatin.. lol 100!

quick keystyle.. type drunk.. lol
 

*pops a bottle open.. feeling nice


corleone a beast, I rip shit like no other emcee,
pretty don.. I bag chicks every day of the week,
come pray with a G, cool out and light this L,
and get so lit, you couldn't recall the time to tell//
true gentleman, keep a twin glock on the hip,
and fire shots that'll spin your head like the exorcist//
I'm next to big.. pac, nas, and all the above,
closest thing since L dropped, hence the name, and all of the buzz//
Corleone.. boss status, I haul static,
I paint pictures like vangouh on any art canvas//
I cause havoc and bomb planets,
alien like.. hartspyreric acids trapped in my lung passage//
.. you bum bastards get spun backwards,
and left for dead holy, after licking a shot like drunk pastors//
uh.. you ain't seeing the kid,
believe what you want but truth is, I easily win//
here, some grease for your chin..
.. cut you up with the hands,
fuck you up where you stand like a sexual stance//
perpetual style.. I'm in a class of my own,
past perfection.. god like with a hell of a flow//
.. genetically gifted, wicked like devilish scriptures,
intelligent.. smarter then two brains together at instant//

flames.

I'm next to big.. pac, nas, and all the above,

^^Um no lol...I mean I know you like to exaggerate nigga but really? Thanks for that tho, made my day ;P

The spin your head like the exorcist line was a stand out here. Standard brag stuff but with a good flow and rhyme scheme to help the piece along. Lost count of how many I wrote drunk or high (probably because I was drunk or high). Some of the best stuff can come from when you're not in a normal state of mind. Solid bars. Braggadocious. Easy read.

Keep on keeping on.

-6

Vote sharp

keystyle.. battle verse to "munster"
 

quick keystyle.. respond back with a same length verse..

yoo..

this character is out of his mind.. what a name to exploit himself//
claims he a monster but never killed a thing for wealth//
you must suffer from down syndrome and ya name don't help,
I noticed you spelled it with a "U" and thought of mental health//
you a sad fuck, with bad luck,
who grew up on a trash truck,
who noticed my name tags spelled on your sisters' math-book//
.. spelled as, "Corleone wuz here",
and '98, the one year,
same year I let the monster (my dick) out to breathe some-air//
you a fag trippin', battle rappin' like he can't get called out,
caught him slippin with his sisters boyfriend going all out//
me??.. I was on the bleachers, getting head with my balls out,
you was the alter boy getting sodomized in the lords' house//
you all mouth with no hype,
with no doe and no life,
a sex offender with a history colder then north poles'-ice//
I'm raw like.. eating poisonous fish mixed with curred rice,
you more like.. softer then most the bitches I fucked all night//
.. the soft type, with no fight, no bark or no bite,
you have no mic skills..
you sound like someone who swallowed something down the wrong pipe//
and yes.. that was a pun intended,
indirect for cock sucker, as you are as mentioned..

^^^ pick my little dude up, lol.

This isn’t good big dog

He's better than you pussy...

^^^ one more time for the triple 9, lmfao.. I straight demolished @Sharp on his own forum. This thread should be in the hall of fame in my opinion.

you're 0-1 vs me lol... why not stick it in your own HOF on your self loving forum of you and 300 bots?

Don't you have other forums to try to convince you're a successful musician? This one's pretty clearly dried up

Corleone what makes you think I won't cutchu

quick keystyle.. fuck "zuchie fiasco"
 

quick keystyle.. respond if you want or not.. keep your verse the same or of lesser length of my verse.. due date 8/7/2020 on or before midnight..

quick keystyle..

let's all play dumb and act like your name isn't as awkward//
is that greek? or a nickname passed down by your-father// (.. lol)
"zuchefiasco", that bro.. has to be horror//
don't know if your parents were drunk when they named you or its a matter of-karma// (.. lol)
your name reads like you were raised somewhere on a farm//
and I could tell by the lyrics that you write in your songs// (.. no skills)
its no wonder you couldn't reply to my threads with something-constructive//
cause you wouldn't know a thing about "hiphop" other than-crutches// (.. lol)
you can't fight, and it's obvious you couldn't rhyme for nothing//
I would of fronted you something but you'd probably burn that in a oven//(.. lol he don't know how to hustle/he couldn't cook a brick)
.. I'm not the type to fuck-with, you duck quick at the sight of drama,
like your girlfriend.. when we watch netflix in our-pajamas// (.. lol, drama as in "beef"/film genre/her giving me blowjobs)
she loves to watch my films.. she's a film-fanatic//
for a quick nut.. I lied and promised her a role as an actress// (.. lol)
the bitch rachet.. she believed it, I cleaned up and was soon-gone//
and wiped the nut off my dick on the same sheets you sleep-on// (.. lol, straight dirty)
she said, "Cor, be strong".. "you know zuche is mentally-challenged"//
I replied, "true that.. but whats with that name he's carrying?"//
she said.. "zuchey was born a transvestite and I know it's embarrassing",-
"so please keep this to yourself because his folks'll get mad at him"//
I said.. "thats not a problem.. " real calm,
and then, "another thing.. ", playing our theme song,
.. "last night, I seen zuche at the club with heels on"// (.. lol)
.. this herb tryna play me in his comments.. like I wouldn't read-and-respond//
I'll beat-and-retard his ass than leave-him-deformed//
I'll key in a verse and bleed from my palms..
on some religious shit.. like I was writing scriptures-or-psalms//
.. keep talking and I'll break open your jaw,
till' your gums fall apart and all your teeth remain on the floor//
so what you saying, if what you saying is false?,
I'll take a trip to your house and kick in your door//
than wave my gun in your face and break-in-your-skull,
as I record the footage over my cellphone for netcees.org//
.. test me gawd, you don't wanna brawl with me,
I'll fuck you up and lay you where coffins-be//
come spar with me.. step in the ring and lose horribly//
pardon me but you will never be as raw as me//
.. I'm probably the sickest nigga to ever exist,
I'll weather the election.. cause come the results, we'll see who's the bitch//

This isnt good man. Do i really have to tell you that? This cant be life

Why you always say quick keystyle? Half the forum free style shit nigga...no need to state the obvious bitch.

This was fuckin' awful btw.

Gone @ him laughing at his own bars

He's straight up donated money to your garbage site and you do him like this? Smh

Also trying to rhyme farm and songs? Smh



btw due date means literally nothing. This is an OM drop. you give others feedback and they give you feedback. Don't act like you get a W if he doesn't respond with a verse

I will never recover from this.

ether.. lol god.. I might key some more bars to this.. I was tired as fuck keyin this verse at 4 am in the morning (lol) last night and I passed out but I definitely wanted to finish it.. just never had the chance to..

I had no clue that was him who donated money to my forum and to prove my point, I even shouted that person out on a thread on #OCTF, respectably. As for our relationship tho.. dude, zuche talks hella shit about on this website and who would think he'd be the first guy to donate anything to my forum? lmfao.

At the end of the day, zuche deserved this.. #R.I.P

Closed casket

lmfao

sad shame that all my battle verses on NC are hall of fame material.. and I got robbed twice on two battles I won due to politics regarding certain admins and their friendships on NC and etc.. smh it would of been dope to see that go down, as im sure it could have liven things up a bit on NC for keeping it real.. lol :: hint :: I hate wasting my time keyin in verses that potentially change the course of creation itself..

but god tho.. lmfaooo.. this verse is classic.

quick keystyle.. fuck "UserName"
 

quick keystyle..

I'll crush your skeleton to gelatin and wreck-through-your-frame//
then use your remains for offerings for devilish-games//
it's imperative, you'd understand you winning is strange// (..lol)
like same sex marriages exhibiting-aids//
yet how irrelevant it is for me to script on this page?//
when this cat is literally gay in frivolous-ways// (.. lol)
.. you not in my class, move out of my lane,
I couldn't depict whats worse.. you talking shit or your mysterious name// (..lol)
.. It's quite delirious, you'd have that displayed,
I guess you and "anonymous" have something in common.. beyond query and phrase//(..lol, as in, "genocide" aka white earl biting my name as, "anonamous"/his name/j query html scripts)
I'll empty a clip right into your face.. three-in-your-spine//
than shoot your brains on your dashboard and "read-your-mind"//
I'll knock your top off.. you not hard, stop pretending you gangsta//
I'll definitely shank ya.. you just a punk bitch internet-prankster// (.. lol)
.. two in the chamber, one in-your-spleen//
and fuck "username" like 3 failed attempts at the login-screen// (.. lol)

quick keystyle.. fuck "plot"
 

quick keystyle.. quick 16..

I'll box your chin in.. you not winnin', I drop wisdom//
.. so ima feed him a verse and watch this plot thicken//(his name/plot, as in, "story"..)
you not listenin'.. don't give a fuck if you brolic,
get dropped after giving me knowledge like courses- in-college//(knowledge, as in.. "oral sex")
pay homage to the greatest, your forced punches wont budge me//
I'm more like neo in the matrix, cause each of your throws don't touch me//(.. lol)
son lucky we on net, cause offline.. he's all pet,
I had him reaching for his phone like he called in a bomb-threat//(.. lol)
he kept dialing in, "9-1-1".. I snatched the phone from his hand,
and showed him the plan, of what it took to be known as the man//
.. he froze in his stance, and didn't know whether to try posing again//
this was after I dropped plot on his head, that's how the story began//(lol.. his name/and plot.. as in, "story")
I first stood him on his feet.. soon after my jab,
he after my cash.. he know Cor straight after his ass// (.. lol)
I mastered the craft of rhyming like a science and math,
and ran plot off more boards, then assignments-in-class//

lol.. ^^^^^

^^^^

lmfao.. ^^^ this nigga never responded back to this..

lol ^^^^^ this nigga never responded back to this either.. LMFAO.. everyone dodging me on NC.. wow.. smh..

quick keystyle.. fuck "exis"
 

quick keystyle..

fuck exis..
I'll punish this guy.. he'll crumble and die//
and mount exis (exit) to the ground, like a government sign//(lol.. his name/government sign)
.. best believe he'll never win, him beating me is a negative//
it's evident he's retarded..
you couldn't pronounce his name without a speech-impediment//(.. exis)
I'll teach this degenerate a lesson.. as I piece his head into segments//
cause either way he's getting fucked, regardless of his sexual-preference//
.. I'll batter this nigga exis in battle and trash his record//
and shatter his clavicle till' he baffles and chatters his death wish//
I'll handle this peasant and damage his essence//
.. and rip exis off his skin like damaged complexion// (exis.. excess/eczema)
I'm raw.. my lyrical skills are beyond his comprehension//
a verbal chemist, destroying labs with liquids tested over records//
saliva samples gathered and measured, when composing my writtens//
in the coldest conditions, been flowing with this sickness before exis existed//(.. his name/the word, "existed")
infectious linguistics'll wreck your existence//(.. his name/the word, "existence")
bullets travel to your body, too quick for the ballistic report to match up with forensics//
I'll torment exis till' he's pronounced schizophrenic//
till' he's institutionalized and subdued by anesthetics//
till' he can't move a muscle due to hallucinogenics//
injected by countless needles, and he pukes his intestines//

quick keystyle.. "shadow boxing tournament" verse..
 

quick keystyle..

you'll get wrecked from the jump and left with a lump//
I'm testing this chump.. looking like something I'd snack on for breakfast-or-lunch//
.. I'll punch you in the gut and make your intestines-combust//
and cut you into sections for an-adrenaline-rush//
.. I'm "dead-as-fuck", like having sex with dead infectious-sluts//
that I will shread you up into peices and "blend-your-nuts"//
who'd defend this punk? he's soft.. he never wanted to battle//
he threw in the flag quick.. like gang affiliates-in-seattle//(.. lol, gang members in d.c area who live near, "the white house")
Im ready for war and dressed in my camou..
throw a grenade if I have to, and watch the shrapnel stick to your skin-like-tattoos//
.. bullets'll hit you when I lift up my pistol//
.. leave you with so many holes, the air you breathe gon' make your body-whistle//

good looks.. ^^^

Lol...Guess you want me to respond to this bullshit? Well not goin' to happen son, have better things to do with my time...get a life bitch.

& This whole quick keystyle //////// shit...fuck off me faggot, you're pathetic.

Exis and exit are the same?

lol, "exis" means "exit" in middle eastern literature, but it was considered a dead language so it was abolished by officials. Freemasons commonly use this term but not all. William Shakespeare used the term frequently, in novels archived in the Freemasonry titled as, "Long Live The King", and else manuscripts but Gold dust (exis) don't know that tho, lol.. sshh.. Obviously, these novels are not open to the public but are only accessible through hierarchy in the Masonry so don't bother looking for them online, lol.

The term was created and revised to English literature by a palesmen (of the, dutch) during the 1400's and was considered to be a romance throughout the history of literature but was abolished from the common language due to on going debates throughout the Freemasonry concerning power and direction. Obviously, this knowledge cannot be "googled" or anything of that nature, per say but as said prior, only are accessible through the hierarchy of the Freemasonry. In essence, don't even bother wasting your time looking this information up, because you won't find anything on it, perhaps.

u ever struggle so hard to flip a name u invent a nameflip