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Objective 01-15-2016 08:44 AM

Definitely, good thing I've already planned to get white girl wasted tomorrow, haha.

Vulgar 01-16-2016 09:41 PM

THIS LEAGUE NEEDS A SHOT OF STEROIDS OR SOMETHING.

Maybe sunflower seed oil. Maybe goat's blood.

Objective 01-16-2016 11:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vulgar (Post 562328)
THIS LEAGUE NEEDS A SHOT OF STEROIDS OR SOMETHING.

Maybe sunflower seed oil. Maybe goat's blood.

Bring forth Edgar Allen Poe's ashes to add in the whiskey in true Hunter S. Thompson style and maybe in the J too while we're at it and we're talking.

grafx 01-17-2016 03:12 AM

my bad - ill take dq. will be voting tomorrow.

Objective 01-17-2016 11:25 AM

Sorry about the ns @Frank.

2tripple0 01-17-2016 11:52 AM

So can we get some votes err is this league still alive?

Objective 01-17-2016 02:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 2tripple0 (Post 562399)
So can we get some votes err is this league still alive?

They usually come on Sunday nights I believe. Give it a few more hours, hopefully people will vote. I'll drop a couple later as well.

2tripple0 01-17-2016 02:31 PM

I'm guessing every battle this week wants votes? Or are u dqing anybody??

Objective 01-17-2016 02:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 2tripple0 (Post 562427)
I'm guessing every battle this week wants votes? Or are u dqing anybody??

I no showed this week, DQ'ing is a job for the mods and I don't think anyone has done something that warrant an action like that either. :p I might vote on all if I can focus enough to do it. Not really been one of my greatest of weeks so trying to cope with everything else first and don't want to drop half assed votes that haven't given enough attention to the poems at hand first as well.

Edit: @2tripple0: I voted on all battles now actually. Don't take what I say too negative though but I hope you're able to get some insight from what I wrote or that it's helpful to your progress in the writing universe. It's dope to see you progress and improve with each poem/piece you put up on this site. Laters.

Inno 01-17-2016 05:43 PM

No Dqs this week

Great turn out folk.

Let's keep it going
@Adonis @Vulgar @Frank @grafx @slecht @2tripple0

Feel free to vote fellas

Adonis 01-17-2016 10:03 PM

I'll try and vote today or tomorrow. Been busy, sorry

slech 01-17-2016 10:49 PM

I brought yall some floats.
@Adonis @Vulgar

Inno 01-20-2016 05:15 PM

@Zen @2tripple0 @Frank @Vulgar @Objective @grafx @slecht

Battles going up tonight

Objective 01-20-2016 05:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Innovator (Post 563032)
Battles going up tonight

Dopeness. Think I'll start writing on something for the mag soon as well. Don't know how much free time I'll get until next week though but if an opportunity comes along where I can spend some time writing a bit I'll send over what I got when it's done.

Inno 01-20-2016 06:02 PM

Fuck yeah!

2tripple0 01-21-2016 12:40 PM

Haven't been online just seen this going to drop tonight

Vulgar 01-21-2016 03:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 2tripple0 (Post 563199)
Haven't been online just seen this going to drop tonight

What'd you think of the feedback you received last week?

Frank 01-21-2016 03:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Objective (Post 562395)
Sorry about the ns @Frank.

Likewise bro. You mind leaving one of your infamous votes on my battle VS VividlyVague in the Winter topical tournament?

Objective 01-22-2016 12:00 AM

Left a vote on it @Frank. Might be a bit critical though. Tbh this might have been the weakest of your pieces I've read so far. Feel free to correct me and/or any things I might have gotten wrong or not thought about while reading in a PM to me to clear things up as the vote might not have paid it justice.

Frank 01-22-2016 03:56 AM

Had a blast writing that piece. Loved your analogy.

What's my strongest piece?

Objective 01-22-2016 09:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Frank (Post 563347)
Had a blast writing that piece. Loved your analogy.

What's my strongest piece?

I can tell you had a lot of fun with it which also turned to be your Achilles heel. The Storyline is okay but the characters didn't seem to have any real motives for doing what they did, being too invested with ideas and concepts can turn into a bad omen if you forget about the other details in the process as well.

Personally this might be your favorite piece of mine, and one of the reasons I look forward to reading your battles/pieces: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=6035 In this one you gave the characters life, development and motives while keeping a consistent storyline with rich imagery and wordplay.
Conceptually this might be my fav of yours: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=4249 You did the repetitive style really well which is hard as fuck to pull off along with sparking some emotions and critical thoughts of my own when I read it. Never ended up voting on it though, don't know why I didn't but I remember reading the battle.

Frank 01-23-2016 04:54 AM

Having difficulty recalling anything you have ever written? Lol. If you were to put as much thought into your votes as you did your verses, you would be more reputable . So while I loved your perception and interpretation and analogy, What have you honestly written that is remotely memorable?

Not taking anything away from your dope ass break down, because it was a fucking trip. Fucking Loved it. Major, major props. Those kids actually refused to say anything positive about my piece, which ultimately lead me to believe there was a collective jealousy of underlying hatred against me. At least somebody responded intelligently

Yo Your feedback made writing that story worthwhile bro.

2tripple0 01-23-2016 12:03 PM

I thought some of it was on point I just started posting online again and it's been difficult getting connections so that I can post again and I'm still working it out and both that verse which is my first in the poetry league and the verse I dropped in the winter topical tourney were rushed and written under extreme circumstances I will try to drop more often but again it depends on how much time I can spend on netcess and how much notice I can comment however with ought thinking that I deserved those two losses ultimately and depending how much it depends on how much it depends on winning battles in the future

@Vulgar

Objective 01-24-2016 02:01 AM

Dope that you enjoyed it @Frank. I don't know if I got any memorable pieces at all. I've only written one piece I was somewhat satisfied with. I hate to say that I forgot to save the only memorable piece I've written and it got lost during the ISTL, the picture given was a fish in a light bulb or something and I had a concept of how it was a metaphor for humanity and the state we're in. Beside of that I don't think I've written anything I'm actually satisfied with myself.

2tripple0 01-24-2016 03:48 PM

What's going on I thought verses were due on Friday all these no shows and no votes on graph and my battle lol wtfgo?

slech 01-29-2016 12:05 AM

I would like feed

slech 01-31-2016 07:49 PM

lets vote and close this week
@Vulgar @grafx @Objective

Objective 02-02-2016 01:41 PM

I'm going vote and/or feed your piece @slecht if it gets closed. Been quite busy lately so I haven't had the time yet. I apologize to everyone for not doing my part but I will make sure to do it in one way or the other.

Inno 02-06-2016 04:59 PM

I'm here guys sorry for the absence had a ruff couple of weeks
@Vulgar @Objective

Continue?

Vulgar 02-06-2016 06:39 PM

def

2tripple0 02-07-2016 12:35 PM

I'm ready when does next week start

Objective 02-08-2016 08:03 AM

Been some weird couple weeks for me too. Fucking intense rollercoaster of a life yo. Hope things are going okay with you @Innovator. Give me a couple more days and I might be back on track as well.

Inno 02-08-2016 10:17 AM

@Objective no doubt we can pick this up on Friday or this coming Monday

Rough first month for the year lol

slech 02-08-2016 04:35 PM

open my battle for kangaroos or some shiet

2tripple0 02-14-2016 09:06 AM

This shit needs to start itself back up

2tripple0 02-16-2016 09:50 AM

Lol what happened to my battle this week?

Inno 02-16-2016 09:55 AM

@2tripple0

I got u in a few

2tripple0 02-16-2016 09:57 AM

Werd up thought I got left behind like

Vulgar 02-19-2016 12:02 AM

@Innovator

Let's celebrate your 5,000th post properly, champ.

@Witty, bring on the brews!

Inno 02-19-2016 12:16 AM

Lmao I'm actually drinking now. Cheers


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