Voting sucks cuz ppl don't understand the dynamics of punch lines

Has nothing to do with the way they construct their lines

Cool story. You just this minute make that up? You're boring me. turn your attention elsewhere, duck.

U shopping labels dawg... Roflzzzz

Zzzzzzzzz. we done yet?

Discussing writing in general and improving comprehension skills of the writings go hand and hand

Dude people don't even depend on set up lines... Some don't even get lines when the set up is in the first line aka the set up

The worse thing is when you see people be overly critica about certain parts of your versel, then you read some of that persons work and see that it suffers from the same problems they were pointing out on your's, and then some. How can you confidently critic somebody elses and offer advice work when you can't even implement it into your own?

I hate when wack people judge my battles tbh

Tru

But like take me for example on battles where I kno I got it u can definitely tell when I just didn't give a fuck about particular lines lol

Its a motivational problem tho

U should explain to wack ppl why u think they suck

What for? So they can say I'm bitching or hating? I haven't spoken on votes against me in a long time not changing that

We at a point that it is what it is

No I just write the first thing that comes into my head, don't have the patience or attention span to do anything else.

Doesn't matter tho, I'm still awesome.

Lol that's the prob tho

Maybe its in the way u approach things too

Sounding cocky or belittling will have that type of effect on ppl

I'm too dope... I have to look down otherwise shine my shoes nigga

Well coming from a Hall of famer, I start with name flips & than string a rare concept in the bar. If you need tips, just pm me. I can help you move up to that heavy weight status.

Dead

This is how I think.

Im not a battler so how I gonna vote pn a battle?

Thats me being completely truthfull

NC, where only concepts matter

Thats not true. Good concepts are ruined by horrible wording on the daily

Once you get good you don't really need to think because it just becomes your way of writing. Back when I battled heavily I was constantly looking for concepts or things to flip into punches. It's easier when you have a couple of personal things to attack and apply your concept search to. All battles and verses are their own, with different situations and nuances that can be applied. Some audiences prefer comedy. Some like being rugged. Wit is always needed, and turning some plays that no one has thought of.

I always decided what kind of style would work best before I started a verse. The first line is important, because it set the tone for me. If my first bar was amazing, then it gave me something to build off of. I don't like when writers write one bar, one bar and nothing really ties together. A good battle verse to me personally is one that hits hard with individual bars, but is better viewed as a whole. Most net battlers don't see things that way.