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Is it juz me or does anyone else wanna see dexx an gamble argue on here.....that shit would be entertaining....

Or battle...

and i already started a #zoominonthatass trend like come on dude. this shit is not simple it takes finesse

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we headed to the mother fuckin closet with a crew of dudes....

but really, i dont know why i come here. yeah i get shitted on and i expected that since day one. but there is always a reason. think cause i followed this school of writing and idealogy behind hip hop music and realized that it was all wrong. now im trying to rewrite that past. but theres no sense in it. have to extract what i can from the past years and use it as a strength

I can't handle no liquor, but these bitches can't handle me.

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this is not the "kind" of song i usually gravitate towards (toward?)
however, with this beat, and those stanzas, yes, absolutely a workable song.
from a technical standpoint personally i felt each stanza was a little bit better than the one prior. the first couple lines are little lame but i think the rest fit very well for the kind of piece that it is.
if lengthened it could keep going on about girl issues or go back to personal reflection, or look forward towards the future... or really where ever you wanted to take it.
girls in particular would dig this track. and im not joking or being condescending i'm serious. giving actual feed here.
the simplicity is good in that it is very evident how it would/could sound.
not exactly of course, but, for readers, damn close to your intentions. if you know what i'm saying.

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tried to rep but couldn't.

thanks for that man, the first part is a bit disconnected from the second for sure. my style of writing is not really line for line but the verse as a whole.. but i can see exactly what you mean... i have been striving for simplicity for quite a while boiling things down
but when u do that, several parts tend to melt into one another...

thanks again dude

I am me is you are him and 'we'.

robbin williams reincarnated?^ i agree with everythen muzzle says. i like u man

u not even saying nothing try saying something like nothing say something 4 once wut ur au saying saisay something for once u not saying nothing for once just do it once plz say something not nothing do it once not once do it twice say something u not saying nothing?!

im not tryin figure out what u tryna figure out breh, stop tryna figure it out and figure shit out im tired cause u tired cause u aint tired ight?

im a philanthropist, organic machinist with the sexyest,
undress-a-bitch, not a pessimist, i see less of him
in your eyes. cause u don't believe in you no more...
it ain't true no more, you know we transformed, cutie

baby...
big baby...
you a cutie for real

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