off bat i was pretty sure this AND unbornbuddha were zygote aliases.

lame as fuck if thats the case

Im recruitin for my crew jeso

U lookin to crew up dog?

A Gory warrior Driven by the Force Within,
Not Crooked people Judging the World We Live In,

The quoted line above was my favorite of this, even though "Gory warrior" just seems off. As for the rhyming of this, it was terrific. Especially considering that English isn't your first language. The thing is, after I read all 419,000 lines of this, I had no idea what I just read. That's the probably the alcohol's fault, but I don't think so. This was cool though.

for whatever reasons, perhaps my own strengths and weaknesses, my opinion is that it was way better in the middle parts than in the beginning...it's all relative of course. I like the piece. but the large middle was stronger than the beginning and end i thought.

some lines i found very entertaining i am lazy right now to go through and paste them specifically but i will here edit this at some point, and do so.

(edit)this is pretty awesome when i did it faster; the beginning too... thanks for the celery line

Attention everyone that commented and gave me feedback...I will work harder on my next post. I will check each and everyone of your posts individually and give my opinion about your raps. Thanks for everything.

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