you tell 'em girl i got your back. they just don't understand you. keep spitting that hot fiyah. `1

You may be able to sing. However your written lyrics are simple and elementary. You need depth to your content. One word syllable end rhymes just dont cut it. You need to elevate your technical writing plain and simple. People that are telling you its hot, are 1. full of shit 2. After your pussy, or 3. both #1 and 2.

if you can say something with meaning, introduce more than 1 syllable to your rhyming words, change your scheme up to include internal rhymes you will come across much more skilled.

elevate.

look what u guys did.

Your end rhymes don't rhyme.
here doesnt rhyme with air
air doesnt rhyme with rhianna
rhianna doesnt rhyme with ballout
ballout doesnt rhyme with hits
hits doesnt rhyme with bottles
bottles doesnt rhyme with sky..

everyone has a Diff taste in music, but Ya'll don't have to be rude about it.

Nigmas comment leaned me.