I'll drop somethin' after work manana.

Thnx knuck this helps @Knucklehead

Shits So Whack...talent's What Hes Missing
A Broken Toilets The only Thing I Wanna See Wiz in

@King Keith @Split @Innovator @Figurative

Progress?

Yah girl on the dick shes an avid call in
She says i go nuts on the pussy, u just Added ball skin

@Knucklehead

Pretty cool, the wording is short and to the point. Idk if a broken toilet or not is relevant but word. Flow was a bit choppy for me. The concept was solid though.

got this later

alec baldwin

Your career peaked with a bj, beetle juice da gawd son
now it's in shits creek with no row gain, a testament to how bald won

The Wu aint fuckin wit this dumb lame.
If Bonds is diversifying, it's cause you added a glove game

outtie

Wiz Khalifa get bullied, that nigga throw punches like a geek
I'll knock him out five times at school dazin the wk

@Knucklehead or whoever, if you got it son
Thoughts comments queries, drop some wisdom

quick feed on you guys that havent been acknowledged just yet

This was cool and complex, i think my biggest complaint would be that the nameflip itself wasn't quite of his name. tbh i think you could do a lot in battles with some work since you're a good writer, those complex ideas can do the most damage if they're well refined

lol i see you http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m2...9p92o1_400.gif

Not bad, lot of layers added to the abbreviated nameflip so its less likely to be played. This is just something to develop and word a little harder over time

Yo the dyke bitch on the left leans me every time.

She's like... watching to see what she's supposed to be doing rofl

Yo AB's so gangsta he got 6Pac's, and MORE fame
I ain't gon take NOTHIN away from Alec Baldwin - 'cept the last 3 letters of his name.

AB came to the wrong barber, I'll cut his hair with a sword
So when I take the last three letters of his name off him, I leave Alec Bald

same basic concept, two different deliveries

...i got shoes, money & the best benz
so y da fuck wld i need bondz...i got oda investment

so why the fuck would i need bonds, i got other investment..

speak properly.

wiz hard? only when hes holdin on some old mans stick
gets him to rub it up n down and promises him its all just part of the magic trick

Lol couldn't help myself

Ok, i'm in like d*ck to a pu**y, so knuckle, what's d challenge 4 me?

Reading the 1st post of this thread

Are nameplays the only thing we work on forever?