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Rawn MD 11-09-2013 09:06 PM
I expected better

Mael 11-09-2013 09:07 PM
What would I be like if I lay my hand gripped with ink against the paper to compose of the poetic arts?

Probably as bad as I just made that sound, meh.

Destroyer 11-09-2013 09:09 PM
sup

Fig 11-09-2013 09:10 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by PancakeBrah (Post 204225)
You constantly no show. The only thing I've read from you is that one open mic I liked. But it had no rhymes. You're just like PancakeBrah except without the writing skills to back up his discussion prowess.
BUT I beat you

Cashius 11-09-2013 09:16 PM
Me.

TYSON 11-09-2013 09:19 PM
Go ahead

Eŋg 11-09-2013 09:32 PM
you haven't read me enough. go on.

Zombie 11-09-2013 09:46 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by PancakeBrah (Post 204252)
You are the retarded version of Neighbor when you do swag and flow, if the retarded version of Neighbor was on life support and could only type by eye movement on an XBox controller. Your open mic audience is 5 year olds who can't read. If there were an infinite amount of Rawns typing for an infinite amount of time they would not be able to reproduce the letter H.
loll

Split 11-09-2013 09:46 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by PancakeBrah (Post 204247)
You are the exact opposite of the saying 'brevity is the soul of wit'. You use weird and complex language well and there are jewels in your verses but you're not confident enough to simply say what you're saying without fancying it up with Webster.com research.
Thanks, understood

Though all my language is organic/ home grown. I guess it does seem really stilted

Split 11-09-2013 09:48 PM
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Originally Posted by oXus (Post 204283)
you haven't read me enough. go on.
Is that Akira?

PancakeBrah 11-09-2013 09:53 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Split Eight (Post 204288)
Thanks, understood

Though all my language is organic/ home grown. I guess it does seem really stilted
I like your writing heaps bro. This topic is a maelstrom.

PancakeBrah 11-09-2013 10:00 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by oXus (Post 204283)
you haven't read me enough. go on.
You're English, right? You post like Vulgar, Black, and Pent in discussion. Acting above. When in all reality you're obviously a cut below the top-top tier you think you're in. Your wording is great and your rhyming is strong but your own self worth makes you the poor man's version of the elite topicalist/open mic'er. You'll disagree with this, which only reinforces the accuracy of it.

Darth Yoda 11-09-2013 10:01 PM
be meaner/archaic want 2 laff more

Eŋg 11-09-2013 10:12 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Split Eight (Post 204289)
Is that Akira?
Tetsuo Shima. from Akira, yea.

Quote:
Originally Posted by PancakeBrah (Post 204297)
You're English, right? You post like Vulgar, Black, and Pent in discussion. Acting above. When in all reality you're obviously a cut below the top-top tier you think you're in. Your wording is great and wording is strong but your own self worth makes you the poor man's version of the elite topicalist/open mic'er. You'll disagree with this, which only reinforces the accuracy of it.
yezzir. lol @ categorizing my boarding habit. i half-agree. i'd given those you just mentioned, and others, their dues as writers and in so doing concede the superiority of their craft. i consider myself an elite open mic'er. i do not consider myself an elite topicalist. a semantic difference, perhaps.

apart from that, this was a solid psychoanalysis with what you were given. werd.

Destroyer 11-09-2013 10:12 PM
analyze me dammit!

veritas 11-09-2013 10:16 PM
Me too please

PancakeBrah 11-09-2013 10:17 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Darth Yoda (Post 204299)
be meaner/archaic want 2 laff more
If the period didn't exist no one would think you are dope. Every one of your aliases is Cristian, and 99% of the board doesn't know what that means. Every one of your permutations writes with postcum on their hand from watching Eminem Vimeos. Boarding. Wise Ways literally jerks off to your verses, Orc likes them because liking them makes him feel smart, and everyone else follows because why not. You all write relatively the same way and emoji each other thinking it's ironic when in all reality people get it and just shrug. You guys are the Finn and Jake of textcees.

Darth Yoda 11-09-2013 10:23 PM
hahHAHAHAa. @BWHAHA @dull boy

cristian is commonly thrown around because he's (inaudible)

good !!!!! I analyze you later acting like you.

PancakeBrah 11-09-2013 10:27 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Darth Yoda (Post 204327)
hahHAHAHAa. @BWHAHA @dull boy

cristian is commonly thrown around because he's (inaudible)

good !!!!! I analyze you later acting like you.
im sure you'll do a good job of it. as an admin, i will delete it if i feel offended.

the exclamation points !!!! are hilarious; we know you think you're smart.

which one is this? the model boxer who knows everyone in new york? or the depressed dad who writes great open mics? or the zany guy? or cristian!? i can't tell!

it's so interesting.

Frank Metts 11-09-2013 10:36 PM
Something about paragraph form without propose punctuation


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