everyone here is going to tell you good job and keep it up and its all around ok.

but this song is very forgettable and i highly doubt anyone here gave it a listen more than once. if thats what you are going for, then awesome. but if you want honest feedback, this is just not good. it sounds like you are literally sitting at a computer and recording your voice while reading the lyrics off the screen.


all that said, keep recording. with time you'll adapt and get better.

So same thing just w ur terrible advice included

Stfu fuckin loser lol

Also lol at everyone here is going to tell u good job

This fagot completely lost

who was the bro who posted a EP a short while ago here? i was supposed to listen to that shit.

anyway.

this was aiite. def lackadaisical with it. it works for some shit - but this could do with abit more energy.

iont think the shit was off rhythm - i wouldnt say it was on either. but i aint mad at that. shit aint as black & white as muhfuckas make out. reminded me of some roc marciano / slash doom shit - flow wise & the way you rhyme.

lowkey i heard some bar about cannons talibani pakistani in action - & thats it i was sold from then onwards lmao nah that line was whack

but this shit was cool.