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Hush 10-23-2020 05:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer (Post 789760)
Nobu is where u eat every night cause ur purse is so fat???
Noblue is what we ALL say when we see u write wordplay like that
I like this as a opener . Could take it or leave it but as the first bar it sets a good tone imo
I’m coming in firing. Not even looking, just ripping off shots
So u could say I’m either gonna Diorama put ur style into a box
....nice this is one of the better wps I recent seen. Don’t work both ways but it works one way so perfect I still like it
U used to be one of the best, but now them lines just ain’t hittin
I mean u barely made it through Dave like u had a Hulu trial subscription
....eh this is bland and like whatever
des is here to end ur run. Dead wrong if u thought I might quit
I’m taking blue out of everything... like I put this iPhone on night shift
...that’s fire to me
u post a lot of pics w/ men where u share longing gazes of young lust
So.... we been saying blue is sus looong before we ever played Among Us
...ok ish
I try to get into his shit, really, but the guy’s just a bore...
That’s why I’m done with Blue Period like Picasso in 1904
....ok all these blue wps are boring me
that distinct wp was rough. Could barely bring myself to vote after I read it
I haven’t been sadder over a blue line since the first time my wife got pregnant
....eh
making me go the max too? forever keeping voters bored and lethargic
The last time blue had a hot 16, 8 of em were actually Parmesan garlic
...lol I like this a lot

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 789766)
Sup old man…How’s T-Mobile?!


first it was cashius, then zelph, the lines were just so crazy
shiiit the miscarriage bars never get old.. and neither does your baby
...eh
it’s nothin, huge shells start poppin’ at ya kitchen
i’m known for being attached to a case, you sell pop sockets for a livin’
....is a pop socket a phone charger in Canada ? If so this is dope
my data plan is unlimited, loaded with some range
your dada plan squirted out in the toilet and floated for a day
....lmao hell no
45 with no savings, wife screaming “where did our life go yo”?!
only Big Picture success you’ve had lately was stealing her an IPhone Pro
....ok
pudgy & bald married an addict, i hope you both carry a will
knew you were unfit parents before i learned shit about your parenting skills
....lol fire
i bet her drinking killed the baby, tit whiskey in an 80’s Challenger
think back you’ll Catcher in The Rye, Holden a Bloody Mess.. no J.D. Salinger
....I don’t get it ..
goneee at you rappin like you’re sportin’ a blicky..
yeahh Des ur strapped w/ an arm-extended, blood pressure’s important at 50
....lol nice
so stop it, you got no shooters or any gangs to call
if i’m Triggered i’m just pissed your wack style gets any praise at all
....cool concept execution was eh

This is super close


Blue had the unfit line which was fire

Lotb


He also had worst line of the battle with dada plan


So that canceled each other out


Allowing Des to sneak this one out barely imo



Very close margin

Vote Des

UserName 10-23-2020 05:54 PM

Des -

Nobu is where u eat every night cause ur purse is so fat???
Noblue is what we ALL say when we see u write wordplay like that
des is here to end ur run. Dead wrong if u thought I might quit
I’m taking blue out of everything... like I put this iPhone on night shift
u post a lot of pics w/ men where u share longing gazes of young lust
So.... we been saying blue is sus looong before we ever played Among Us

Cool verse, man. The entire first half was really hitting a stride and i was loving it, it felt like, but the second half being entirely blue nameplays and the hot 16 bar didnt help things at all to me. Thought the hot 16 was awful personally. *SHRUG* I gave you points for the blue nameplay i liked the most though haha.


Blue -

first it was cashius, then zelph, the lines were just so crazy
shiiit the miscarriage bars never get old.. and neither does your baby
it’s nothin, huge shells start poppin’ at ya kitchen
i’m known for being attached to a case, you sell pop sockets for a livin’
my data plan is unlimited, loaded with some range
your dada plan squirted out in the toilet and floated for a day
i bet her drinking killed the baby, tit whiskey in an 80’s Challenger
think back you’ll Catcher in The Rye, Holden a Bloody Mess.. no J.D. Salinger

Cool verse, yes - theres a lot of miscarriage lines, but they were generally well done. I loved dada plan, so maybe I'm weird. Also, you get the ribbon of the week for "the wordplay line that user actually liked".

Close battle, Des was on fire and fell off, and Blue was hit or miss, with the line leaning more towards hit. I could see this going either way for sure.

V - Blue, by a little

UPN Zuch 10-23-2020 10:49 PM

We need votes here

UPN Zuch 10-24-2020 01:00 AM

Next vote wins let’s go

sral 10-24-2020 06:54 AM

Nobu is where u eat every night cause ur purse is so fat???
Noblue is what we ALL say when we see u write wordplay like that

okay

I’m coming in firing. Not even looking, just ripping off shots
So u could say I’m either gonna Diorama put ur style into a box

i liked it conceptually, felt it could have attacked him more though

U used to be one of the best, but now them lines just ain’t hittin
I mean u barely made it through Dave like u had a Hulu trial subscription

lol light jab

des is here to end ur run. Dead wrong if u thought I might quit
I’m taking blue out of everything... like I put this iPhone on night shift

again, idea is good but execution isn’t harsh enough imo

u post a lot of pics w/ men where u share longing gazes of young lust
So.... we been saying blue is sus looong before we ever played Among Us

okay

I try to get into his shit, really, but the guy’s just a bore...
That’s why I’m done with Blue Period like Picasso in 1904

you’ve had a couple similes in this verse, decent concepts but execution lacks to really have it land with zing or humour for me

that distinct wp was rough. Could barely bring myself to vote after I read it
I haven’t been sadder over a blue line since the first time my wife got pregnant

I see you kind of taking your opponents pen here to deflect off you, if anything those this almost plays into his hand as I see it by confirming what he’s gonna say

making me go the max too? forever keeping voters bored and lethargic
The last time blue had a hot 16, 8 of em were actually Parmesan garlic

decent, kind of got tired of the Blue-everything type lines though by this point as they were overused imo

vs


first it was cashius, then zelph, the lines were just so crazy
shiiit the miscarriage bars never get old.. and neither does your baby

almost too obvious to use, it’s attacking but felt light. went for the shock factor too much

it’s nothin, huge shells start poppin’ at ya kitchen
i’m known for being attached to a case, you sell pop sockets for a livin’

lol cool

my data plan is unlimited, loaded with some range
your dada plan squirted out in the toilet and floated for a day

cool

45 with no savings, wife screaming “where did our life go yo”?!
only Big Picture success you’ve had lately was stealing her an IPhone Pro

not bad

pudgy & bald married an addict, i hope you both carry a will
knew you were unfit parents before i learned shit about your parenting skills

I liked it

i bet her drinking killed the baby, tit whiskey in an 80’s Challenger
think back you’ll Catcher in The Rye, Holden a Bloody Mess.. no J.D. Salinger

seemed far too wordy for me personally but I see what you were going for

goneee at you rappin like you’re sportin’ a blicky..
yeahh Des ur strapped w/ an arm-extended, blood pressure’s important at 50

okay, liked the more comedic attack

so stop it, you got no shooters or any gangs to call
if i’m Triggered i’m just pissed your wack style gets any praise at all

okay closer

kinda an odd battle too me, felt Des had the concepts to compete but not the wit or execution that Blue had largely. Des has some fresh Blue nameflips, maybe overdid them a little, Blue actually mixed things up nicely and landed a few diff angled shots with better execution to his other than that Catcher In The Rye line which I wasn’t a fan of around the middle

I got Blue in a close one


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