Originally Posted by Illicyt_Scryptz (Post 767184)

My verse (18 lines):


Act 1, Scene 1

A lone man, young but stressed, cleans his desk nervously
He adjusts his hat purposefully. He's wearing his cleanest shirt and jeans


Door opens, shuts. The foreman enters.

Foreman:
Listen here, Blue. You're a good kid.
'cause of you, this here wordplay mine's done better than it ever did.
You've sure made this old wordplay miner's heart mighty proud,
we need to face the music, son. I'm shutting it down.

Blue:
All due respect sir, this text, sir, still good, Mr. Foreman
and my pap made a living on wordplays and his pap before him
I know how it looks in this day and age, with gunbars all the rage,
but I KNOW I can make this wordplay mine work. I'd bet a months pay!

Foreman:
A month's pay? Blue, you damned fool, I like your spunk
But a month's work for free? too good a deal to pass up
I'll give you one month with this wordplay mine, but I can't afford no more
Truth be told, I thought it dried up back in '04..

Blue:
Thank you sir! I'm sure of it! Soon, I'll break new ground!
I'll make pap... and his pap.. and his pap... and his pap proud.


Blue, with newfound spirit, rushes to his notepad, eager to score
the wordplay that his pap's pap's pap never dreamed of before

Blue:
Albatross.... I'll butt ross?

Scene




Let me know if you would like to battle, Blue Bayou

-IS

Originally Posted by Corleone (Post 767206)

suck a dick.. fuck you for comparing myself to this dude.. your a homo.. and no, that dude is not me, by the way.. how the fuck you just out of the blue, on some snake shit, even bring up my name on this subject when you know me to be on some shit where you genuinely know I would never do anything like this.. bro, we go back to well over 20+ ago years on U.G, I.E, etc.. we collaborated together onna few text pieces.. and you try to dog me out like this? wow.. how riderish of you.. and if im not mistaken, we even had a crew battle with these chumps over at netcees.com over at our U.G home based forum as a crew and I knew it was odd to see you as fuccin mod and erting on a few sections I peeped on this forum but I had no clue that you could ever become the dickryder you are today.. wow.. you get no love for that comment.. 100!

Originally Posted by Genocide (Post 767213)

Werd? Lol. Clown ass nigga. Do you man. Just keep my name out your mouth. Idk wtf your trippin about. You took insult to something that wasnt an insult? Whatever yo. Put the drugs away junky ass nigga. You clearly aint thinkin straight. So eager to make everyone think yousa big shot. Ill smack the fuck outta you in plain sight fucking fool. Dont speak to me

Originally Posted by Corleone (Post 767215)

.. I'll smack the shit out of you foreal foreal nigga, and thats not on no threat shit like you just stated over the internet, thats a motherfuccin' fact..

Originally Posted by Corleone (Post 767215)

lmfao.. anon, please.. you fuccin net thug, you aint never been on a block your whole life dude.. when you bring up my name on the streets, people literally know me for selling drugs, fuccin niggas up, shootin niggas, robbin people, breakin into homes, and shit.. fuccin bitches and gettin money.. and thats all over east coast, mid west, and west side nigga so watch your fucking mouth you pussy.. I'll smack the shit out of you foreal foreal nigga, and thats not on no threat shit like you just stated over the internet, thats a motherfuccin' fact.. I'll be in your cribbo nigga, strippin u butt ass naked with my gun right to your face like nothin nicca.. taking all your money and house shit.. believe that you herb.. and who you calling a junky? Ive never been a junky my whole life.. lmfao.. suck a dick pussy.. 100!

Originally Posted by Illicyt_Scryptz (Post 767184)

My verse (18 lines):


Act 1, Scene 1

A lone man, young but stressed, cleans his desk nervously
He adjusts his hat purposefully. He's wearing his cleanest shirt and jeans


Door opens, shuts. The foreman enters.

Foreman:
Listen here, Blue. You're a good kid.
'cause of you, this here wordplay mine's done better than it ever did.
You've sure made this old wordplay miner's heart mighty proud,
we need to face the music, son. I'm shutting it down.

Blue:
All due respect sir, this text, sir, still good, Mr. Foreman
and my pap made a living on wordplays and his pap before him
I know how it looks in this day and age, with gunbars all the rage,
but I KNOW I can make this wordplay mine work. I'd bet a months pay!

Foreman:
A month's pay? Blue, you damned fool, I like your spunk
But a month's work for free? too good a deal to pass up
I'll give you one month with this wordplay mine, but I can't afford no more
Truth be told, I thought it dried up back in '04..

Blue:
Thank you sir! I'm sure of it! Soon, I'll break new ground!
I'll make pap... and his pap.. and his pap... and his pap proud.


Blue, with newfound spirit, rushes to his notepad, eager to score
the wordplay that his pap's pap's pap never dreamed of before

Blue:
Albatross.... I'll butt ross?

Scene




Let me know if you would like to battle, Blue Bayou

-IS

Originally Posted by Genocide (Post 767225)

This nigga trippin. Allentown? Ok shawty. Tell you what.. Allentown is a hop skip and a jump from my folks place. Next time im home ill holla at you.. Real shit though, no one in allentown cares who the fuck you are. Shoe shining ass nigga. Homeless bum

Originally Posted by uh-oh (Post 767293)

yo you bodied blue but ima ask you to refrain from sigging your posts with -IS

this is trump country round hea

ain't with that terrorist muzzie shit

Originally Posted by Adverse (Post 767296)

@Corleone the way you're making enemies all of Netcees going to drop a diss track on you on some "We Are The World" shit

Also Ouch = Cor?
- Never seen them in the same room together.
- Both go off on weird five paragraph tangents about random shit
Idk just a thought

Originally Posted by Corleone (Post 767295)

no one in allentown cares who the fuck I am? nigga, me and my squadron run allentown nigga since day one.. the fuck you talking about? I can get you hit up foreal foreal talking that shit.. and send some shooters along your way to run up in your crib and handle you asap.. you better watch your mouth before I find out who you family members are and run them out of town on some G shit where their scared to come out of their houses.. you better respect me nigga, real shit.. and homeless? nigga, Ive never been homeless.. shoe shinin nigga? whos shoes Ive ever shined? nigga, I know real mobb bosses that would laugh at you for making shit up like that since you wanna get technical homie.. know who you beefin wit nigga and respect the art of war before you think you could go to war with me because im a top dawg in my city nigga.. better believe that.. 100!

Originally Posted by Illicyt_Scryptz (Post 767300)

Thank you, Uh-Oh. I am sorry, but you will learn.

Thank you, Adverse. I look forward to more battles.

Does no one want to battle?

-IS