Yooo but shouts to @Aero for picking up on that F a G/effigy wordplay. I lost fair and square needed to convey that bar better, if anyone has any tips on how to do so lemms know, I'm still a student to this shit

Props. You won that. I'll give you tips on that bar right now.

Yeahhhhh sorry I didn't catch that

I've actually done an effigy bar as well so of all ppl not to catch it LOL

@Adverse

You're predictable as a hot summer, "I'll spray this glock, bustin' at your ribs!"

Predictable as a hot summer? Lol that made zero sense then to follow it up with a silly set up wasn't too good. So work on cleaning that up.

But only time they see you as 'F, a G' is when they're erecting a statue for the greatest cocksucker that's ever lived

The punch is actually not worded badly it's just way too many syllables. Should try to keep your punchlines to no more than 20 syllables this is 32... Buuuut if you're going to do more than 20 syllables for the punchline make sure the set up flows with multis




You're gangster? Dead the shit, I'm not the one you'll get credit with
I'll only say F, a G if they erect statues for the greatest cocksucker to ever live

Alright i can work on that, I've always known my setups to be one of my weaknesses, they've been too long winded tbh. And i know in this league especially they're almost as important as the punch itself, thanks for the advice man i needed it i appreciate it

I think yall should shorten the due date.. shits to long for 1 bar.. 3 days max

You’re taking advice from HIM?!?!

Man c’mon

Aero is a good dude, besides most other people on this site are so reluctant to spare some knowledge, like battle rap is the Bush's Baked Beans recipe or something smh

Bush baked beans recipe lmao

Lmfaaaaao