WOah! this was sick fams. yes i say fam now, and finna. for fun. in real life.
i like this big time breh.
reminded me of wise ways, he post anymore?
crazy how you said so much with so little words, impressive
nice to see you can still rhyme, this was dope

This was one of the best verses ever posted here. I know it's self praise but I would say exactly the same regardless who wrote it.

I am not often happy with my previous work, I usually cringe. Imo this is a masterpiece and I don't believe many people here could have done this.

Unfortunately the shit I'm currently writing could be bettered by a toddler headbutting a keyboard.

Your self praise is warranted here. Coming from the land where law of Jante is king I still find you to be proud of this work in order.

"Castigate compassion" was great, the switch up in flow surprisingly sudden but not unwanted. Closure simple and poignant while maintaining a complex flow without seeming cluttered or excessive. Content and the heart of this piece as a whole is dope af, too

10/10, will read again. Left inspired

Thanks my friend.

For me, this is the best thing I've ever written. Apologies if I came across as arrogant. I'm just very proud of it.

Fluid

This was a treat to read. Loved the descriptive tone throughout, the „we mine in your spirit“ was really unique and a highlight to me. Great rhymes. What else is there to say + Mr Fox.

Thank you @Alice

I hope you're well.

Up because fuck off that's why.

What. I love the way it rolls off the tongue. Super lit.