i think its cool man the drums are kinda wack and the overall sound is a little generic but if you had 1 verse and then the other 2 were more interesting rappers i think people would listen to it, spice the hook up a little

i fuck with it, hooks dope, i dig the beat. your best track for sure. good shit fin

improvement of any craft is two-fold. First, you have to not suck. Second, you have to be good. These are distinct things. This track doesn't suck, but it's not good. With some production polish and cleaner audio, I could see it as a filler track on a mixtape.

I'm sure it's your best track so far, but that's an empty accomplishment. I just watched a documentary where a young Eminem was convinced he couldn't record anything better than Infinite. Obviously, that's stupid. Did Eminem improve as an MC after Infinite? A little, but mostly he improved as an artist because he realized his style. You haven't realized yours.

I appreciate all the listens. It means a lot.

Eminem didnt record anything better than infinite. Although rock bottom was pretty dope and probably could be seen as better. Post infinite was the commercialised clown around em that dre created. It was always in him, he had humorous bars, but so did plenty of people. But word

Finny your biggest hurdle is your ego. Thats literally the reason you get hate and people not as good as you dont. Even posting that track i understand all the feelings you go through, when i make something worth posting its basically the greatest shit in the world at the time, unless i mention yea this is some quick rough shit or something. But ill try and keep my ego under wraps because people who post on the internet are miserable in general and if they see someone feeling themselves its the extra incentive for them to pick it apart know what im saying. If you post undeniable heat you wont have to sell it as undeniable heat. Itll stand on its own. But word good shit man, and look at this post as a positive since its critiquing how you post, not what you post. Keep banging out

I hear you bro, all I was saying is that anything negative I wasn't gonna pay no attention. And I'm pretty surprised there really wasn't even anything that terrible said. LOL

But yeah, I got some other shit coming too just gotta get it recorded.

You should pay more attention to the negatives than the positives, that's how you get better. Positive comments are nice but ultimately worthless.

lol

The funny thing about music is that's it's art. It's open to criticism for sure, but if it's used primarily for expression then there's really nothing you can say negative about it.

THEN MAYBE DON'T POST IT ASKING FOR PEOPLE'S OPINIONS IDK GUY

Art still has a technical aspect which can be measured and critiqued. There's always room to improve, no matter how good you are.

for fuck's sake

*clap emojis*

what are you recording with?

I'm just using a shitty stage mic right now. Once I get the whole album hammered out as far as what I want to do, I'm gonna go to a real studio and re-record it.

At least, that's the plan.

Fucking sucks

You'll never realize your style cus you don't have one faggot

Oh well then.. I guess diode and the random dollar sign infested guy with a gun gif as an avatar didn't like it. I'm going to go blow my brains out now.

It's been almost 20 years and I've heard every bad thing imaginable about me and my music.

At some point people just need to realize my "style" is what it is.

Don't like it? That's fine. I'm still going to keep doing it because I enjoy it.

Thx tho.

Didn't even listen to it bc I know your "style" thx girl

Take 3 1/2 minutes out of your day to at least give credence to your bashing.

"Wow, this guy is the worst rapper ever, he sucks. But I don't know for sure because I was too chicken shit to even listen."

Lol what a loser. Dude so scared he might actually like a song of mine he can't even listen and give an honest opinion.

I'd rather be a hated and despised individual for wanting to be creative and take a plunge than sit there and boo from the sideline. Wait... Not even the guys who go to the game to boo are as bad as you. They at least went to the game.