Originally Posted by Orc (Post 571372)

OG SMOKINSTEIN:



will break-up-letter- so bad I should've started my verse with dear john.
Cause we different speeds, you school zone, I'm autobahn.
weak. Like it seems as though you're punch is totally disconnected from the set-up, which isn't always a bad thing, but this punch just lacked...
And the path he on,headshot, bullets roaming/roman his dome like the pantheon.
One shot miss, and clap his clavicle, now his collar stick up like the fonze.
this punch woulda been aight but pantheon and like the fonze don't rhyme for me and this kinda ruined it
Niggas predicted you to win, but my bars are all heaters.
The lines I got in hand will make believers outta you palm readers.
Ehh. Flow and swag on point here but not a great punch
Chinese chopper Asian model like tela tequila
Give'em 5 bucks these cheap hot rounds aint little Cesar.
Nah
I can keystyle better than what u write, you not winning who u kidding.
Before this battle I pictured you dead, I'm Jude law in road to perdition.
Not really feeling

Originally Posted by Orc (Post 571374)

LETTERMAN:


You drop dope on your site, but here it'll be average shit
So after Smoke bombs, he'll have to toss a few to escape the embarrassment
Haha, cool opener
U gon be the one I bitch. Bet his death is slow
I'll make sure this guy fries with the metal like a Futurama episode
Nice
Them weak ass punches wont have us feelin shook
Your verse'll never burn, stein bears as much substance as that children's book
nah
I'll make him beg for his life b4 I empty every shell
And have this fruit talking in front of a clip, like this was Veggie Tales
Nah
Cant stand to look at his own mug. He got some cruddy ass luck
If we see smoke and mirrors together, he's tryna disguise the fact he's ugly as fuck
This is cool to me