Okay well I've never read a piece before by either of y'all but I felt similar to all the other voters...split felt more poetic and ullr just seemed like he forced a lit if hid verse because of his use if rhyme scheme ..My one piece of advice to ullr is not to use words that aren't grammatically correct if you want to use complex word's then just try to attain them naturally. .that way you don't have to go searching through a dictionary finding the meaning to words that don't even exist...The other nitpick I gave trouble with is the whole centering your verse...I just felt like that structure took away from your piece. Anyways I thot that Dr dog was put together on more simple terms and because of his lay out he's getting my vote for this week...His verse was interesting to read and it didn't make me raise an eyebrow like huh what are u talking about so all in all...

Vote///Dr dog