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...the truth is destruction, the world is flowing loose in a fluxion of useless production, consumed with consumption, so what he has to do is to loosen the suction of a blueprint keeping the youth in a dungeon, a movement is comin', so he'll never call a truce 'cause he won't follow the rules of corruption, he sees the wolves in discussion...
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Is that good or bad? Lol
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my fav part
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Nice work
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Thank you.
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Since we're all about the multi's recently.
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wow, interesting piece, very well constructed with content to match.. left me with an uneasy feeling, but, in a good way lol well done sir! solid
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This is dope. Glad it got bumped because I hadn’t read it. Easily my favorite brand of rhyming. It got a little repetitive with the subject matter, but this was fun and I wish more people would write this way.
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This was actually better then what I was expecting. I like your flow and rhyme scheme use. Nice imagery mixed with some.cool metas. The beginning of it for up to 12 bars were my fav . Really a nice written piece here.
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you're not bad but i honestly am comprehensively better than you.
you could probably outdrink me, though, so there's that. |
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