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MMLP 12-01-2015 09:23 AM

CRAZY!!!!! well done Mr. Wit

check this @sraL

Pharaohs Army 12-01-2015 12:36 PM

...the truth is destruction, the world is flowing loose in a fluxion of useless production, consumed with consumption, so what he has to do is to loosen the suction of a blueprint keeping the youth in a dungeon, a movement is comin', so he'll never call a truce 'cause he won't follow the rules of corruption, he sees the wolves in discussion...

Witty 12-01-2015 12:59 PM

Is that good or bad? Lol

Pharaohs Army 12-01-2015 01:58 PM

my fav part

Frank 12-02-2015 02:43 PM

Nice work

Witty 12-10-2015 05:28 PM

Thank you.

Witty 01-27-2018 09:35 AM

Since we're all about the multi's recently.

Lyriscologist 01-27-2018 12:02 PM

wow, interesting piece, very well constructed with content to match.. left me with an uneasy feeling, but, in a good way lol well done sir! solid

dull boy 01-31-2018 11:35 AM

This is dope. Glad it got bumped because I hadn’t read it. Easily my favorite brand of rhyming. It got a little repetitive with the subject matter, but this was fun and I wish more people would write this way.

Elemental P 01-31-2018 05:12 PM

This was actually better then what I was expecting. I like your flow and rhyme scheme use. Nice imagery mixed with some.cool metas. The beginning of it for up to 12 bars were my fav . Really a nice written piece here.

Eŋg 03-04-2018 10:17 PM

you're not bad but i honestly am comprehensively better than you.

you could probably outdrink me, though, so there's that.


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