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Zen 03-16-2014 04:45 PM

I'll try to have to you tomorrow morning but it may be Tuesday morning since I don't have a computer with Internet access at night. But I should have it by tomorrow.

Just Write 03-16-2014 05:56 PM

@Zenland, I repped you. And im so fucking excited about it! You have no idea how long ive been trying to figure out how to do that.. I HAVE THA POOOWWWEEERRR!!!!


p.s. I finally smoked guys :) I love you all!

Just Write 03-16-2014 05:57 PM

Damn, cakes to the face tho..



@El Pancake Sig check bro, check out dem cakes bruh!

Zen 03-16-2014 06:10 PM

Lol I'm jealous. I desperately need some Mary J.

Zen 03-16-2014 06:32 PM

Beer. It's whats for dinner.

Mike Wrecka 03-16-2014 06:45 PM

@Certain I will do battle reviews and power rankings. When do up need it by?

Certain 03-16-2014 06:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mike Wrecka (Post 299950)
@Certain I will do battle reviews and power rankings. When do up need it by?

Monday night or Tuesday morning. Thank you much.

Zen 03-16-2014 06:58 PM

Who wants to collab? I'm drunk and wanna write.

Just Write 03-16-2014 07:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zenland (Post 299965)
Who wants to collab? I'm drunk and wanna write.

Send me something

Zen 03-16-2014 07:05 PM

You send me something!! I'm trying to write right now but I'm coming up with shit so I need some direction or sumfin.

oats 03-16-2014 10:18 PM

here I am, votes coming

Ink 03-16-2014 10:50 PM

will be voting in an hour or so! gotta wrap up some work first

YDK 03-16-2014 11:15 PM

All 5 votes done.
an word at the weed I bout ta smoke. Just got home from bowling wit the family an kids for Jessica's birfday, the big 24

patrown 03-17-2014 01:40 AM

story leads are a trip. enjoyed the difference in reading material and everyone's approach. great week.

YDK 03-17-2014 02:13 AM

i'm just happy that weeks over lol I usually have trouble continuing a storyline that I didn't create

Just Write 03-17-2014 02:16 AM

I keep catching myself staring at my gif for extended periods of time.

YDK 03-17-2014 02:27 AM

me too, I keep expecting the match to continue and shirts ripped off

YDK 03-17-2014 02:27 AM

you'd think the bitch would duck under her ass one of these times

dyedinthewool 03-17-2014 04:00 AM

But I didn't finish voting :(

dyedinthewool 03-17-2014 04:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Just Write (Post 300285)
I keep catching myself staring at my gif for extended periods of time.

She's gifted

e11even 03-17-2014 04:37 AM

Leave it to Frank to use a samurai sword as a battle reference. He's just a bundle of awesome.

Zen 03-17-2014 05:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dyedinthewool (Post 300307)
She's gifted

@Captain Obvious to thread.

But guys (& dyed) I'm drunk and have not slept and have class in four hours. Today will be interesting.

dyedinthewool 03-17-2014 05:49 AM

The votes i couldn't post b4.

Quote:

I set in motion. Seductress' sings.
Her organs play a chilling symphony.
Precise Incisions. God-like physician.
Purge a soul removing sole ambition.
Pocket full of dreams. Mouth full of Genes
Valiant vagabond. Out with the spleen.
Sick sick sick

Truly, i hadn’t read anything you’ve ever written, and I think this is sick as shit. Crazy detail and awesome wordplay. i only have one negative thing to say, and trust that the positives outweigh the bad, however I feel that while you had a clear cut point that you saw through describing and using your topic, I feel you were incredibly straight forward. Is it wrong that see poetic elements in your piece but I miss the idea of a longer bar?

Vulgar- I have not read anything from you before but one piece, and this being the second. With that being said, this piece does not compare. Your mechanics, like Adonis are good in this piece. You covered your topic but I feel it was not as best to your ability. You dabbled in weed both in recreation and politically which was nice but with your potential I certainly expected more

Quote:

I smelled brimstone, dragon vagina and weed... the last one putridly laced
Called him the hugest disgrace, his eyes resembled Jupiter's base
Bloodshot, with vessels red...
He loved pot, because it sent him to a truly beautiful place
Puff barked at me, "Arguing against marijuana is a futile debate!"
Now don't get it twisted...
I'm all about fields of tobacco, Cuban cigars and rosary groves
but weed makes you stupid - turning young kids into disorderly dopes
I totally loved that. Awesomely put!

Mvgt Adonis this week.

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frank/ink


This battle is weird, but enough to see who deserves my vote this week.


Frank- crazy mechanics, your flow is awesome in this piece however, using as many topics as you did, I don’t think worked in your favor (from my perspective). This entire piece is full of great bars that for me you can write 4-5 different topicals on. It feels totally disjointed for me.

Ink your piece has a storyline that follows through with your topic and while your mechanics are not as sharp as that of franks, your diction does you justice. this felt like an in the moment kind of piece and it was suspenseful!

Mvgt INK


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