I'll try man. Just sucks to put so much time into a piece. Read it a few times to yourself and your friends/family, enjoy the piece then have people point out negatives in it. You'd think after ten years I'd be over that criticism lol.

I sent it at like five in the morning Pacific time lol.

Lol man, sometimes I read feed and it pisses me off because I completely disagree, not because of arrogance, just because I disagree with the feed given and think it's bullshit...but you just gotta remember everyone thinks differently, and just because someone says something is flawed, doesn't necessarily mean it is..it's just that person opinion. Not to say you shouldn't listen to feed, just not blindly...go over it in your head and if it makes sense to you or you think they are right, incorporate it in to your pieces, if not don't...don't let it get to you, every single piece has negative aspects, doesn't matter if you've been writing for 20 days or 20 years.

Just believe in yourself and kill shit with your next verse.

Anyone who has any sort of competitive bone in their body will be pissed at each and every loss, I still am to this day, not at my opponent or the voters, pissed at myself for not doing enough for the win...I am super hard on myself lol

For sure. For sure. I also think people read our verses differently than we do, which is obvious. I think a Video Topical Tourney/Week would be dope. That way we can post the piece for people to read it but also hear us read it the way it was intended to be read.

Ditto.

Just target your weaknesses and work on it until they become your strengths.

I used to struggle with rhyme schemes, so I worked and worked at it until insanely complex schemes became the thing I was known for.

@sraL

I'm posting topics tonight bro

@rest of league. Get some votes for the champ match please and others. These are crucial battles, 2 out of three anyways.

@Godcomplex @Witty @asylum @Flo Real @Anjahl @sacrifice @Certain @Rakontur @Frank @Vividlyvague @timeless @MMLP @2tripple0 @Richard Corey @Ullr @YDK @NYCSPITZ @taggingoffmemoryhatemelater

Let's finish the week strong and hard like muh caulk

getting mine in soon.

white iverson.....

WHEN I STARTED BALLIN IWAS YOUUUUUUUUUUUUNG

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SLsTskih7_I

@2tripple0 has attempted to sign out guys!!!

Please help me encourage him not to!!

lol I don't think anyone gives two shits about me in this league........im not trying to cry for votes er anything but to lose week in and week out has become a bit crummy for a lack of a better word

Stay dude, you just need to start taking peoples advice and feedback in to account and work on your weaker points, work at it and you'll get there.

alright ill stay one more week er wateva but I just feel totally garnished at this point with ideas and shit........like theres a style I use in my raps/topicals.....and I don't feel it needs to be tampered with.....but if that's the general concent of the lyricists on this site I don't know id rather not participate.......I hope that doesn't sound frenetic er wateva

Just out of interest, have you been getting more votes/wins over in the league at RB?

its only been two weeks at the league in rb.......and I won the first battle with a ns opponent and this week witty is winning 1-0...... but no I get the same kind of feedback I get on this site.........just strange because I know what I like about my writing and others just feel it isn't dope enough for one reason or another.....but eghad I just want to write the way I like writing I don't feel like changing for anyone.....but aye like witty said Ill take others opinions into consideration but at this point I feel my rhyming is at a level that I don't see myself surpassing until the day I die at this point anyways......but aye I guess you gotta take your victories where you can

I dont think you should change

Did you sign out?

You read your verses to your friends / family?

*dead.

Yup