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Sometimes 'simple' rhyme schemes are more effective than 'complex' multiple rhymes. Consider some writing to address themes of depression or nostalgia etc. In this situation perhaps move away from multi-rhymes especially ones that are close to each other and back-to-back because the nature of it would detract from the themes to develop. Worse still is when there is awkward wording because of a forced multiple rhyme. Why write something in an overly convoluted way just to meet some minimum requirement of multiple rhyming, when sometimes a simple and concise language with 1 or 2 syllable rhyme is more fitting?
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The best writers get their points across clearly and cleanly while not ignoring complexity of content or rhyme.
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I actually tend to speak in constant multis, honest, all night long, whether lackin sleep or not tired at all
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Ya but if readers never pick Up on tour stuff,, change yvour shit to ogetest contestants vores
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"If I'm in the closet then you are below me
Cuz you take the b-a-t outta basement homie" |
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Cause it isn't a scheme, its a way of life, didn't really mean for it to be taken in stride
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Darn
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Sure, but there are verses in which everyone literate enough to be in this league can understand the content relatively clearly.
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i shudda quoted. damn.
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i like beer.
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I like boobs
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The syllables don't match up, though.
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Neither do your sisters hips..anymore
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