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Dove Dozer 05-17-2013 09:46 PM

I cant get any of these youtube vids to play.. can you show the links?

Adonis 05-17-2013 09:56 PM

Nah...Just youtube search Benjamin Grimm

The first one is

Sit em down - Benjamin Grimm

Then Type Benjamin Grimm

There's one with him wearing glasses. It's a 13 minute concert

IDK how to post links. They just turn to vids

Just Write 05-17-2013 09:56 PM

Ill vote if u want.. I want in this next week

Just Write 05-17-2013 09:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by nO gOoD! (Post 60243)
I cant get any of these youtube vids to play.. can you show the links?

I Cant from my phone

Dove Dozer 05-17-2013 10:16 PM

Someone tell me how i can use a larger image for my sig. My dog pic is big but gets resized

TYSON 05-17-2013 10:19 PM

Don't know why I just used a pic I searched for and it came out large.

Adonis 05-17-2013 11:20 PM

yeah, Tyson likes um big

TYSON 05-17-2013 11:42 PM

U know me so well. Big girls got that wet wet.

Adonis 05-18-2013 12:12 AM

Wet wet mouth when they see a mcDonalds

TYSON 05-18-2013 12:54 AM

And my dick is the big mac

Inno 05-18-2013 12:58 AM

fat girls suck dick like skinny girls throw up.

TYSON 05-18-2013 01:15 AM

Is it strange that I'm actually physically attracted to big girls? Not morbidly obese but extra thick thick?

Objective 05-18-2013 03:36 AM

@TYSON: Seriously.. I´m somewhat confused myself, I´m honestly questioning my own writing now. I thought I had an idea of what I write is great and what isn´t. I guess I can´t even judge my own work anymore. I try to be my worst critic, whenever I´m not really satisfied with what I write people like it, when I write something I´m satisfied with it seems to move in the other direction. Perhaps I´m overcomplicating things and simple straight forward messages do its deed. I mean, the stuff that Buddha said about really liking my verse, I can´t get myself to understand that personally. Perhaps there´s something I´m missing in my own understanding of what´s great and what isn´t of the stuff that I write? I read your piece and thought it was a lot better than mine.

People seem to enjoy the verse and it´s something I wouldn´t have posted because I thought people wouldn´t like it. I feel it lacks a lot of things in terms of the writing itself and the story. I think I need to do some serious revising about my work, put them up against eachother (the verses I´ve written so far in the tourney) and how I write stories since people seem to enjoy this type of writtens. Idk man.

TYSON 05-18-2013 03:46 AM

Lmao I see why they like it and it ain't like they didn't like mine. I actually see what they saying and felt the same way. I have just been fucking around with u tbh. And I agree with your whole statement. Good job bro. I'm trying to see how I got better in certain aspects of my writing but it seems like I've been weakened in my storytelling. Hmmmm very strange...

Adonis 05-18-2013 04:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Objective (Post 60384)
@TYSON: Seriously.. I´m somewhat confused myself, I´m honestly questioning my own writing now. I thought I had an idea of what I write is great and what isn´t. I guess I can´t even judge my own work anymore. I try to be my worst critic, whenever I´m not really satisfied with what I write people like it, when I write something I´m satisfied with it seems to move in the other direction. Perhaps I´m overcomplicating things and simple straight forward messages do its deed. I mean, the stuff that Buddha said about really liking my verse, I can´t get myself to understand that personally. Perhaps there´s something I´m missing in my own understanding of what´s great and what isn´t of the stuff that I write? I read your piece and thought it was a lot better than mine.

People seem to enjoy the verse and it´s something I wouldn´t have posted because I thought people wouldn´t like it. I feel it lacks a lot of things in terms of the writing itself and the story. I think I need to do some serious revising about my work, put them up against eachother (the verses I´ve written so far in the tourney) and how I write stories since people seem to enjoy this type of writtens. Idk man.


Not sure if I read your verse this week but...you are extremely talente. I'm doing a feature on the mag and went read just about every verse posted this season. And my man, you not only deserve to make playoffs but posses talent to win more then a couple heavy weight bouts. Cheers..#real talk

Objective 05-18-2013 07:50 AM

@TYSON: Lmfao, you fucker. I honestly thought you felt like shit for me saying that crap. Haha. However, when it comes to improvement in the writing department Ive always felt that improvement comes in bumps and curves rather than a straight line to the place we´re at atm. Like we´re improving some stuff but it leaves the holes on the other things more wide open and makes it easier to spot which in turn makes the piece itself look worse than previous works, but once we manage to fill those holes and it balances out again it reaches a whole new level of writing and shit gets better. At least that´s how it is for me.

@Adonis: Damn.. Thanks man. Never really looked upon myself as talented but it´s seriously dope to see that someone thinks so. Specially among all the great writers on this site and from someone I consider to be several levels above myself in terms of skill. Makes me a bit more confident about my own shit. I hope I´ll manage to champ something like this some day. I still got a loooong way to go, but thanks for believing in me. Always trying to do my best.

Witty 05-18-2013 12:11 PM

I haven't written in weeks....I feel the itch, it won't be much longer.

It's coming.

Adonis 05-18-2013 12:47 PM

Sounds like you have crabs bro...No Bueno

Fig 05-18-2013 12:52 PM

Man when i get writers block, that shit lasts like a month or two. It can feel nice to step away from the writing, but at the same time, it's frustrating.

Mike Wrecka 05-18-2013 01:17 PM

the best way to get through writers block is to write

real talk. some of my best verses have come a day or two after some real horrible ones

if I took a month off I would never have penned them


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