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God Of War 09-05-2013 08:00 PM

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Originally Posted by dull boy (Post 143374)
Yes, it's obviously a play off of an Eminem line. Anyone familiar with Hip Hop knows that line, which is why turning it into something else makes it humorous. In writing it's known as parody. The fact that I'd have to break this type of thing down to someone who says they judge battles is sad, and you're either very out of touch with an element of writing or you're reaching so you can be a faggot. I'd say a little of both.

ahh so what your saying is in the middle of a verse i can just use a jay z line and when its mentioend i can claim it was parodying it? with no paradoy int he other bars the only parody line was that exact line? cool i got to remember that fucking biter

PancakeBrah 09-05-2013 08:01 PM

If it's obvious enough. Which it was, in that particular dull boy verse.

What's funny is Jay-Z does the exact same thing with Biggie lines and idiots online think it's biting.

C'mon GoW.

The Warden 09-05-2013 08:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dull boy (Post 143391)
Don't nobody.



OHH HOO HOOO

MAYBE UR NAME SHOULD BE THE WARDEN

GRAMMAR POLICE AKERT!!

WOO OOO WEE OOO u WWEEEKKOKOO


TOTALLY GOT ME DUDE.NAILED IT.

dull boy 09-05-2013 08:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by God Of War (Post 143393)
ahh so what your saying is in the middle of a verse i can just use a jay z line and when its mentioend i can claim it was parodying it? with no paradoy int he other bars the only parody line was that exact line? cool i got to remember that fucking biter

I hope you're trolling.

God Of War 09-05-2013 08:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah (Post 143396)
If it's obvious enough. Which it was, in that particular dull boy verse.

What's funny is Jay-Z does the exact same thing with Biggie lines and idiots online think it's biting.

C'mon GoW.

man if a newbie did that shit half the site would be treating him like gamble,, the fact its dull boy yall ride him and give him the benefit of the doubt


i dont care what there name is the shit was lame he used a bar he got off a famous dude and its all good because yall like dude rofl


doesnt take talent to use someone elses bar does it?

God Of War 09-05-2013 08:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Warden (Post 143398)
OHH HOO HOOO

MAYBE UR NAME SHOULD BE THE WARDEN

GRAMMAR POLICE AKERT!!

WOO OOO WEE OOO u WWEEEKKOKOO


TOTALLY GOT ME DUDE.NAILED IT.

you should write a verse, i can give u the first half just choose any jadakiss verse you want dont worry its a parody

PancakeBrah 09-05-2013 08:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by God Of War (Post 143400)
man if a newbie did that shit half the site would be treating him like gamble,, the fact its dull boy yall ride him and give him the benefit of the doubt


i dont care what there name is the shit was lame he used a bar he got off a famous dude and its all good because yall like dude rofl


doesnt take talent to use someone elses bar does it?

But he's built enough equity to know he's not biting. If Jay-Z's first verse did the homages to Biggie he did later in his career he'd get the same shit. Plus it fit the verse, and he played off it. /dickriding

Splitty Octavius 09-05-2013 08:06 PM

We as the OM swept this minor transgression under the rug and kept it under lock and key.. loose lips sink ships nomsayin?

PancakeBrah 09-05-2013 08:06 PM

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Originally Posted by dull boy (Post 143392)
Maybe, but I'd write one better than both of you. Bwaha is pretty humorous, though. Depends on what direction he took.

I'd be too self-serious. But I still think mine would be better.

God Of War 09-05-2013 08:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah (Post 143404)
But he's built enough equity to know he's not biting. If Jay-Z's first verse did the homages to Biggie he did later in his career he'd get the same shit. Plus it fit the verse, and he played off it. /dickriding

its also mid verse, no statement around it claiming it was clowning or he was doign a "parody" the fact he says it was a parody makes it ten times worse because the verse itself wasnt a parody. so in the midst of a reg verse u throw a bar in for parody? sounds weird as fuck to me

Splitty Octavius 09-05-2013 08:08 PM

ITS CALLED A REFERENCE

IM KING OF NY, GOW

PancakeBrah 09-05-2013 08:09 PM

Jay-Z did his homages mid-verse. The tract of logic you've chosen is confusing to me.

dull boy 09-05-2013 08:09 PM

Gow, you just seem sour now. Sound angry. All bitter about me. Hate me. Strong emotions coming out of you. Biting is taking credit for someone else's line. That shit was such an obvious flip, only a homosexual with a vendetta would think it was anything else.

God Of War 09-05-2013 08:09 PM

aye splitty i didnt know people used references int he middle of a verse and call it a aprody untils omeone else says it was a refernce skhdskhskhshdshd

The Warden 09-05-2013 08:09 PM

ALVIN KARPIS PARODIED THE ENTIRE ARCHIVE. DULLBOY WEARS BLACK LIPSTICK. PANCAKE LISTENS TO THE BEARS AN PUTS DICKS IN HIS MOUTH. BWHAHA IS A SENTINEL. EDDIES VERSE WAS DOPE. MOST BLACK PEOPLE MAKE ME UNHAPPY.

Splitty Octavius 09-05-2013 08:11 PM

A parody is a reference
If you don't understand what's being satired... it can't be funny...

Without the reference it wouldn't work as a line

PancakeBrah 09-05-2013 08:11 PM

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Originally Posted by The Warden (Post 143413)
ALVIN KARPIS PARODIED THE ENTIRE ARCHIVE. DULLBOY WEARS BLACK LIPSTICK. PANCAKE LISTENS TO THE BEARS AN PUTS DICKS IN HIS MOUTH. BWHAHA IS A SENTINEL. EDDIES VERSE WAS DOPE. MOST BLACK PEOPLE MAKE ME UNHAPPY.

<3

Destroyer 09-05-2013 08:12 PM

post said bar
des will weigh in with the "right" answer
I'm inclined to disagree with gow immediately because of his dark knight-challenged world view
but I will reserve my opinion heretofore til I see the bar

BWHAHA 09-05-2013 08:12 PM

no. well i wont take dis awai from dul boi cuz he iz getting up dere in age...& well dis is wut he haz

dat he can rite old man novel better

lmao <3

pancake no.

jk idk what capable of tbh

but i do no dis

my lava vodka watermelon chakra..is not to be trifled wit lmao!!!!!!

God Of War 09-05-2013 08:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer (Post 143417)
post said bar
des will weigh in with the "right" answer
I'm inclined to disagree with gow immediately because of his dark knight-challenged world view
but I will reserve my opinion heretofore til I see the bar

in the middle of dull boys verse he said im acid rap but i dont rap on acid and eminem said i aint acid rap but i rap on acid

@The Warden lets collabo here is my verse


[Jadakiss]
AH-HAHHHH! Uh, yeah, yo
I did it my way, lights off on the highway
Greek statues on both sides of the driveway
Word to the stamps on the diesel
The way these niggaz is lookin either they got cramps or they evil
One go we all go, D-boy fresh but hard dough
Cashmere and suede cargoes
On top of the beige Wallo's
45 government edition clippers, straight hollows



just ignore the jadakiss name its parodying


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