Ok that aint gonna,solve ur garbage ass feed

Let's be real

My feed actually gave pointers to help u make shit better I didn't just say nah or ok on each line like most do. Get over yourself

I don't see the problem with his feed and I'm the one he voted against. if you guys got any constructive criticism I'll gladly take it, I'm trying to get better and I feel like my punches were bland. I'd like some pointers

you're a good man

Don't know too much going on for me right now

Here's a more in depth look at one of ur bars

Love and hip hop do not conincide, end of discussion
So Tahiry won't be around when this Joe B gets shot down in public

So I'm not exactly sure how tahiry is pronounced, but I believe its ta hear he

So if this is correct then this will make sense.

I would have done something like (this gonna be super rough but ull get the idea)

nobody's fond of u, we should forever remove this twat altogether
Tahiry (ta hear he) won't be around could single handedly put the love n hip hop back together

I feel you on that, the whole point of that bar was referring to the fact joe budden got rejected in public by Tahiry for a marriage proposal. In other words shot down so it was just a straight punch, I see what you're saying with the wordplay but it would just feel like doing too much to me, or is that what people dig?

tbh diff people are gonna take it different ways. I didn't get the joe budden angle as I'm not aware of the dynamics of tahiry or that show so someone who kows more about that situation could have enjoyed that bar more than I did. There are bars that are objectively trash and there are some bars that are gonna come down to personal opinion. I think that bar may come down to personal opinion.

I can understand that, not everyone is going to get everything, it's probably my mistake for not being relevant enough. I think that's one of my biggest issues, relevance and creativity too. But I'll work on those more, I used to text battle a lot but I'm barely getting back into the swing of things. Thanks for the advice

My bad for the bitching then @Adverse u can take that dub if u want cuz i swayed and shit was,uncalled for

Nah you're good bro it's alright. If I deserve to lose then I deserve to lose just got to step my game up.

Both of you fucking suck.

Fight me fag is this The Overweight lover smash from RB?

ur both overweight tho

Lol true but still got these hands tho

Fuck yall and yall over weight claims. But yea tho...da fuck happened to rb?

what u mean other than the fact it's next to dead

I wanted the vbl dammit

it'll happen I'm sure

I wanna be a part of that, but that's about it

Word, same here.

NC shud try starting sum shit like that