Adonis

sometimes I wonder if you are a fish with mechanical legs that can play fetch

We both won this time :D

Ugh next to your piece my structure looks horrendous. perhaps I may focus in the upcoming weeks. I tend to get lazy but after contributing so much to the OM again I feel revived.

I went 12 I think....or 10? I dont remember but I dropped

I have yet to find the inspiration to write you something to lose against. Regardless I applaud you for checking in.

I'm writing on a phone man an I'm a ex coke head myself lol my structures always fucked on this phone so I gotta try harder than just a story that doesn't flow ya feel me?

Thank you for not being and idiot lmao I know my verse wasn't nearly up to par but I think you're the only one that atleast gave the verse a second thought

I also have like negative 100 million rep. It'd be nice if it was at zero & then the ones left were my true rep... not that that matters. I came on this site not knowing what I was doing, and I've learned a lot. I am thankful for this site because it forces me to write and get better while taking criticism.

Uhm some jackass lied about me PM'ing him too much. I think its just some admin(s) have it out for me here. They took away my rights to post new topics for legitimate reasons (I was posting topics too often in the OM area, I've learned my lesson). They took away my ability to delete my own posts, which is just weird... I guess because I would edit stuff. I think it was after MKG and I had a fight in BFB's topic and I told MKG our shit should not be aired out in his topic of good writing. Then he agreed & we deleted the shit ass posts about fighting.

Admins took away my right to private message, so here are two links to some stuff I have written (that isn't in battle format):

http://keymarkhha.tumblr.com/post/98...lor-turns-gray
http://keymarkhha.tumblr.com/post/98443257812/silence
http://keymarkhha.tumblr.com/post/97...time-and-space