Kill Spree

Hard to read on 1st shot, my man. Have to stop and reread half way in to your set up just to comprehend the message you are trying to get across. Same thing for the 2nd line/the punch. Try and re-read the lines out loud in a non Joe Boston accent and make sure it's clear without stumbling. If you can recite it on the 1st read out loud without issue then it should be clear enough for the reader/voter - if not then there is your answer. If you can recite your own bars without issue how can you expect the voter/readers too? I've always said - execute the bar 3 different ways. Always go with the clearer and harsher one. That's always helped me in the past and still do it to this day. You have the concepts - they are just hindered by your wording and executions, bro. I've always said that. I always thought you were dope but your wording and executions hold you back the majority of the time.

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